Was looking for feedback on my new video (the book is the main part of the stop start) and some other parts but what I was really looking for was feedback with the story telling. Iv been doing it for so long now that it makes sense to me but from a clean point of view I am not sure if the story comes across clear or makes sense.
Its unlisted on my channel at the moment and would really appreciate feedback before I release it.
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Hey, that's fantastic!! Animation, story, and everything else. The voiceover is great - did you do that as well? Reminds me of those old Rankin/Bass cartoons, like the Wacky Racers or Simon and Peabody (is that what it was called, the talking dog and the boy who used the Wayback Machine to travel through time?) or Rocky and Bullwinkle.
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Thanks Strider. I hire the voice over, my voice has an unnerving effect on people He does a great job and would recommend him to anyone.
Sorry Simon I noticed a huge mistake and uploaded it again on a different link, didn't post it again because a second link it seems a bit spammy
It's up to you. I could not find your channel, presumably called hairyhands, on YouTube. If you want some feedback, you need to provide the link.