I have created another video, I feel that I have solved my light flicker issue and been careful with my shadows. But I would generally like some feedback on this video and suggestions on where I can improve. My Medium for this video was Play Doh, used Dragon Frame at 15FPS.
I will continue to use this thread to ask for feedback on my videos as for some reason I wasn't able to edit my previous thread. I don't want to clutter the forum up.
Thanks in Advance.