My very first stop motion animation video! Looking for feedback!

Please let me know what you think! https://youtu.be/86IHZIQ4fME

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Really enjoyed this - a lot of time, thought and energy has clearly been put in. For a first attempt this is very good indeed! Nice simplistic, but distinctive style. All very cool really.

Wow, thank you, that means a lot! 

The Disused Yeti said:

Really enjoyed this - a lot of time, thought and energy has clearly been put in. For a first attempt this is very good indeed! Nice simplistic, but distinctive style. All very cool really.

very charming. 

just watch for the background moving can see a bit of the table at one stage. parts where your hand comes into shot and little bits appearing on set that look out of place. 

I liked it, but for me, watching the animation play out at an oblique angle totally ruined any immersive quality. I was conscious of the desktop at all times...

Nice little cut-out animation film, the story flows along.  Very good indeed for a first effort, the speed of the movements is good throughout.  I don't mind showing the sheet of paper at an angle on a desktop, letting the viewer see how it's done.  But you could try going the other way for the next one - having the blue sky paper fill the frame, and taking care to avoid any bumps or objects in shot or shadows.

I'll embed the film here so viewers don't have to go to Youtube to see it:

On a technical note - that's not how it works, mama duck laying the eggs, then going off flying with the jetliners, and coming back after they's hatched!    She's got to sit on the eggs and keep them warm until they hatch.

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