That looks like a clay sculpt. Would that have been done by Wah Chang? Even this one looks better than the one featured in the film.
I see the 2 headed Gargantua on the wall, but please not that one! Unless you redesigned it to become the puppet it should have been. ( Like Jim Danforth's version.)
Please take this as constructive criticism, I just thought I would give some thoughts that might make your sculpture even better. I notice that the shoulders are not symmetrical...the right shoulder is very soft and blends into the body quite a bit while the left shoulder juts up and is more defined and protruding. From the pictures I was looking at on the internet, I think that the left shoulder should be softened a bit and the right defined a bit more. I think that would improve upon your already excellent sculpt. My other thought is that the head seems just a bit small for the body. Maybe it is just the way it looks in the photos but it just feels a bit small. I don't mean to be mister art critic here, just trying to give an opinion from another set of eyes. Good luck with your sculpt.
I understand your critiques but I'm literally trying to clone Ray's original sculpture as closely as possible and if you look at the film and photos of the original puppet (especially the front and back profiles) you'll see that's how Ray sculpted it. That's not all that is asymmetrical with the original Talos sculpt, the rib cage differs a bit from left to right sides and the entire leg musculature is very different on both legs, even the ear guards on the helmet are off kilter by quite a bit looking at the front view of it. I've taken all measurements directly from the Talos segments of the film and have scaled them to the 17" studio scale that I'm working in. That was one thing about Ray's creature sculpts.... they were seldom symmetrical.
The head is in a reasonable human proportion when you add up how many heads tall he is. It looks like around 7 heads tall to me. If it seems small it is mostly because of the very wide shoulders, but that's how Ray made it.
Looking at images on the web, there is what looks like a cast bronze figure with a bigger head. He may have modified it from the original puppet sculpt. With the actual puppet it's harder to tell since it isn't usually standing front-on.
That bronze casting was a completely new sculpt that Ray did when he was making bronze versions of some of his most popular characters, he did the same thing with the Cyclops and Rhedosaurus but they all look different from the original puppets. There are 2 scenes in the film where you get a really good straight, front on view.
Out of curiosity how much does the armature weigh?
I never weighed it before starting the sculpt but it probably weighs just a little over a pound at most
Whoa only that!! How tall is it? Thats crazy that its that light.
The armature is studio scale to the original puppet which is 17" tall, and yeah it might weigh more between a pound and a half to two pounds but that's it..... it's mostly made of aluminum
Thats alot bigger than I thought, lol I always take for granted how little aluminum actually weighs.